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Harsh words and violent blows;
Hidden secrets no one knows.
Eyes are open, hands are fisted;
Deep inside I'm warped and twisted.
So many tricks and so many lies;
Too many whens and too many whys.
Nobody's special, nobody's gifted;
I'm just me warped and twisted.
Sleeping awake and choking on a dream;
Listening loudly to a silent scream.
Call my mind, the number's unlisted;
Lost in someone so warped and twisted.
Burnt out wasted empty and hollow;
Today's just, yesterday's tomorrow.
The sun died out, the ashes sifted.
I'm still here, warped and twisted.
©2005-2009 ~psychotic-dreamer
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can't understand why i'm submitting all this old stuff. i liked it..

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:icondarthrane:
Nice tatoo...And the poem is just awesome. Keep up the good work.
:iconviperrogue:
Your so passionate with your words. You have true talent.

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:iconbeautifull-freak:
Wow... :wow: Amazing..

It has a good beat in it.. keep up:clap:

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Curt: Excuse me fellows, may I raise a glass to the loveliest man in Europe.
Brian: And they tell you it's "not natural"!


Nothing makes one so vain as being told one is a sinner
:icontickandswisted:
I love the rhyme in here, it works really well
:iconmeg-i-licious:
WOW...is all i have to say. this has to be one of my favorite poems i've seen on DA. i love your rythm(i cant spell) I'm speechless. this is so amazing

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Ever feel like you're living a lie?
Every day of my life...
:iconpsychotic-dreamer:
thank you so much! i really appreciate it. i've gotten so many comments since i posted my old stuff up. more than i've gotten thus far on dA. thank you alot! i really love you guys. not so much romantically, or friend-wise. just the 'i'd hug your corpse' kind. but it's love. oh yes. it's love.
- :orange:

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:iconmeg-i-licious:
Your welcome, your stuffs amazing! and its safe to say i've never heard it put that way before...but i like it

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Ever feel like you're living a lie?
Every day of my life...
:iconpsychotic-dreamer:
aw, thanks! i really appreciate all the comments. it's making me swoon...
- :orange:

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i :heart: _____
:iconbacktomyseaside:
"Sleeping awake and choking on a dream;"maybe is just me with my ideas...but this is so real(for me)...i mean..i always seem to be a sleepy, dizzy person...and i`m creating all kind of dreams...even if i`m awake
"Call my mind, the number's unlisted;"....ha...u don`t know where`s my mind at....u can`t reach it...because it`s all mine...and u don`t know the secret code...:)...u see just the surface....
...this is the way i see things...but probably are just some silly ideas....
anyway...good job...goes to the fav

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please prepare for the evacuation of souls 10, 9, 8, 7, 6.........

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